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ifyouletitflowwiththesea;somedayyourwishwilletrue〃

flowalong;littleglassbottle

withamessagecontainingawishontheothersideofthehorizonthere;itquietlydisappears

youalwaysdideverythingformysakeallthatiwanted;andyet

iwasalwayssoselfishandtroublesometoyou

you;whograntsmywishesarenolongerherewillmythoughts;onthisseaarriveattheirdestination

flowalong;littlewishtearsandregretwhenirealizedmysinsitwasalwaysaftereverythingwasalreadyoverflowalong;littleglassbottlewithamessagecontainingawishontheothersideofthehorizonthere;itquietlydisappearsflowalong;littlewishtearsandregret〃ifweweretoberebo〃

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評論什麼的

其實說真的,我不喜歡特別犀利直接的指出我的錯誤,但是我還是希望在改文的時候能有比較直接的,所以評論的話只要說出我的不足就可以了,至於回訪什麼的說一下就行了。

這本書的風格是和同學打賭的,所以自己本來只是想融合很多我自己看過的所有小說的風格,再寫這個的,但是朋友死活要求我要試一試